Aww I know what you mean! I'm currently writing a story of my own- on chapter 21 now, so close to the homestretch!- and 'show don't tell' trips me up quite a lot! I've already edited the first chunk of it, and I'm sure I'll be editing it to death once I'm finished; editing's always a good thing to do and it always improves your story again and again!
If you like I'd be happy to read through it I'm going away for a few days, but I'll be back on Thursday x